You absolute !”£$!
I was totally charmed and loving it and then you botched the ending.
Would you care to revise? The opening 2½ pages are wonderful.
I won't say who the editor or the magazine are but I was a little flabbergasted. The entire story is only 4 pages in length and now I am torn. Do I rework a piece that looks nothing like my original story and pull it even further down a different road and risk it getting published, or do I sub it off to someone else and risk further rejection (or possible publication somewhere down the road)?