Working on re-writes today, reading blogs and being a bum in general. All this while waiting for my wife to get home from work. Not that we can do anything because she is on call this weekend. Oh, well.
I re-wrote my short story Lullaby (572 words) the re-write is 860 words and I don't know if I like it any better. I started it over from scratch using a little bit of conversation from the original and the idea but I don't know if I like it as well . It seems to be missing something that the first one had. I don't know if it was the spontaneity or the meter and rhythm to it but it seems off. Might have to set it in a file and look at it in a couple of days.
Best of luck to everyone this weekend.
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